Dead or ALIVE
We f
a
l
l
And
e
s
i
r
o r and o
v e v
e v e
r and o r again
NeVeR sEeMiNg To STOP.
And finally I have reached the
i
o n
p t
where I can go no f a r t h e r
o
I have reached the t p.
up
Whatever goes must come
down.
A delicate feather I f
a
l
l
upon this poor town.
Until the wind picks me UP
the Angel lays in DiSgUiSe.
e g
Ready or NOT our lives will c n e.
h a s
s n i
o o I will c o m e to r
First off, I really like the author's note. I figured I saw the influence of e. e. cummings, but knowing that you purposefully did so is pretty cool. I also am appreciative of the risk taking here. Taking risks with writing brings the challenge of facing criticism, and feeling uncertain about what we do as writers. At the same time, risk taking is a quality of an advanced writer. Excellent job. I love the poem, and the spirit it was written in.
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